Developmental & Line Editing Package

$0.055 per word

(payment plans accepted)

SAVE $0.005 per word with this package deal!

Save anywhere from $300 (60,000 words)–$750 (150,000 words)

Looking to knock out two birds with one stone? Combining line and developmental editing is the way to do it! This is an extensive service where you will receive feedback relating to content, plot, characters, pacing, & line editing is included along the way. During this process, I do not mean to alter your tone or writing style. My goal is to help you communicate your story as effectively and efficiently as possible. Feedback not only involves in-line comments throughout your draft, but it also includes 10-30 pages worth of feedback in the form of an editorial letter. This package deal can be performed within one round of editing or services can be split while maintaining the same price!

What You Get:

• Developmental & Line Editing

• Analysis of your novel’s big picture

• Content editing

• Character(s) analysis

• Plot analysis (what works and what doesn’t)

• Dialogue flow

• Dialogue structure & formatting

• Dialogue tags vs. action tags

• “Show, don’t tell” will be pointed out & corrected & tools will be given for technique

• Suggestions relating to the order in which the chapters/scenes are presented (if necessary)

• Passive voice will be replaced with active voice or merely pointed out if you have too many mistakes in this area

• Arrangement of text

• Analysis of flow

• Sentence structure & order/flow

• Deletion or alteration of repetitive words or phrases

• Correction or highlight of confusing phrasing

• Deletion of unnecessary words or lines

• Errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation

• Word choice (such as alternate suggestions to avoid repetition)

• Standard manuscript formatting

• Basic fact-checking (such as brand name spellings and historical dates)

• 10-30 page analysis & critique of full manuscript (editorial letter)